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Shuddering
hands, blood red eyes, insatiable desire- a bottomless pit.
He looked
around, his eyes landing on her.
A different
wave this time- wild, hypnotic and jittery.
420 piff, with me?
It was more than a choice of only the inner-city
hipsters.
Ps- For those having a little difficulty in understanding 420, here's a wiki link. You're Welcome :)
Disclaimer- The writer in no way promotes the consumption of cannabis. This article is purely fictional.
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I really like the phrase "bottomless pit", it told me a lot about the desire.
ReplyDeleteNice work!
Thank you Kir :)
DeleteVery thought-provoking. Good job!
ReplyDeleteKind words, blainecindy!
DeleteI like this one a lot. Nice!
ReplyDeleteYou're always gracious, Susan.
DeleteI like how you captured the other world feeling you get and how it affects others differently.
ReplyDeleteThank you for that, Kathy :)
DeleteI was in Brooklyn in February and march for work. You captured half the borough, perfectly.
ReplyDeleteI guess then it's the same everywhere in the world! It truly has become more than a choice of the inner city hipsters.
Deleteooh..I liked the way the first line describes the feeling..shuddering, insatiable..nicely done as usual, Soumyaa! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Uma!
DeleteStark and honest, Soumyaa. Loved this take! How addictive it can be and how well you've said it in 42 words.
ReplyDeleteWow, I love your comments always! Thank you
Deletethis brings back many memories! "bottomless pit" reminds me of the "munchies." really wonderful work :)
ReplyDeleteMunchies, haha. Thank you for being here Malaika :)
DeleteI live in Brooklyn and this is definitely fantastically accurate. I can't even pinpoint when that even came about. Great piece!
ReplyDeleteI live in India and it's almost coming about here as well. Brooklyn is spreading the fever it seems ;)
DeleteThank you so much April !
I love the emotional transition you created. "a different wave this time. nice!
ReplyDeleteOops. Forgot the other "" you know what i mean. ;)
DeleteHaha that's ok. And that you for that comment! :D
DeleteYou unwittingly channeled my downstairs neighbors perfectly, Soumyaa!
ReplyDeleteDid I just do that? Tell them on my behalf that they're heading towards a bottomless pit, will you please? ;)
DeleteI like how you took us through the different moments and aspects of this vignette.
ReplyDeleteThank you saroful :)
Delete"Wild, hypnotic, jittery" -- can't think of better words to use. Great job.
ReplyDeleteThank you! That is some flattering comment
DeleteAww your post is superb. Very different from the run of the mill type.
ReplyDeleteThank you Usha ji. Glad you feel that way :)
DeleteA different take, Soumyaa. Great :)
ReplyDeleteWas it? Thank you Anita!
DeleteBang on! It's crazy, wacky and superb. An ode to hipsters and the green chanel:)
ReplyDeleteAnd I'm smiling now ;)
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