This week's Five sentence Fiction is based on the prompt- DAZZLES
Wearing a skin-clutching blue dress, she took extra care to justify the occasion.
Sweeping eyelashes over her midnight blue eyes, pink lips, flawless defined curves, edged heels giving her elegance, teaser to the rest.
While others could not have enough of a glance in her direction, she stood in the doorway, hair swaying by the wind, looking passionately as I arrived.
Hands on her hips and arching eyebrows she gave me a sheepish smile, ready to receive plaudits.
Did she not know that she could dazzle me by her simplicity alone?
What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week Lillie posts one word for inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word.
you described her beautifully, specially the part "sweeping eyelashes over her midnight blue eyes" ! loved it :) 😊
ReplyDeleteThank you curls !
Deleteah man! You made me imagine myself as her! DAMN! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteI'm sure you are so much more beautiful, we can only keep imagining ;)
DeleteThank you Red!
Wow! Some depiction here eh? Blue-tiful ;)
ReplyDeleteHaha! Blue-tiful your comment
DeleteReally elegant! So true. Love the 'simplicity' message, Soumyaa
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Anita. I'm glad the message could be conveyed
DeleteSuch a straight from the hear tale Soumyaa :) Loved it!
ReplyDeleteAnd we just called it a tale ;) yay
DeleteI also love the simplicity of the message, so often that message is unrecognized but so true.
ReplyDeleteCouldn't agree more! Thank you for being here :)
DeleteYeah, completely agree.. Simplicity is the best attire :) Loved it yaar!
ReplyDeleteThaaank youu! :D
DeleteLoved the tiny details. Gather you kept shiv in mind writing this. ;)
ReplyDeleteShivani. Yes! She actually was on my mind! OMG how in the world did you know?
DeleteI can read thoughts. I am prof charles.
DeleteHer beauty is reflected in your words very well! :)
ReplyDeleteMine is also on simplicity.
I just read yours Umang, It's so simple, yet so admirable!
DeleteThank you and Welcome to my blog :)
Makes me want to be in her shoes.. :D awesome!!
ReplyDeleteMaybe you already are, Anusree !
DeleteThank you
Awesome depiction Soumyaa :) Loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Reema :D
Deleteyou have great narration style. Being a girl I cudn't help falling in love with the blue dress.
ReplyDeleteThank you for that appreciation Anu :)
Deletebeautiful description of her beauty but yes simplicity is more beautiful
ReplyDeleteThe Lone Survivor
Isn't it? ;)
DeleteShe could with the simplicity but sometimes dressing up makes you feel great... very nicely done.
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