Thursday, 26 June 2014

Dazzled #FSF

This week's Five sentence Fiction is based on the prompt- DAZZLES





Wearing a skin-clutching blue dress, she took extra care to justify the occasion.
Sweeping eyelashes over her midnight blue eyes, pink lips, flawless defined curves, edged heels giving her elegance, teaser to the rest.  
While others could not have enough of a glance in her direction, she stood in the doorway, hair swaying by the wind, looking passionately as I arrived. 
Hands on her hips and arching eyebrows she gave me a sheepish smile, ready to receive plaudits.

Did she not know that she could dazzle me by her simplicity alone?


What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week Lillie posts one word for inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word.

28 comments:

  1. you described her beautifully, specially the part "sweeping eyelashes over her midnight blue eyes" ! loved it :) 😊

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  2. ah man! You made me imagine myself as her! DAMN! Loved it!

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    1. I'm sure you are so much more beautiful, we can only keep imagining ;)
      Thank you Red!

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  3. Wow! Some depiction here eh? Blue-tiful ;)

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  4. Really elegant! So true. Love the 'simplicity' message, Soumyaa

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    1. Thank you so much Anita. I'm glad the message could be conveyed

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  5. Such a straight from the hear tale Soumyaa :) Loved it!

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    1. And we just called it a tale ;) yay

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  6. I also love the simplicity of the message, so often that message is unrecognized but so true.

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    1. Couldn't agree more! Thank you for being here :)

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  7. Yeah, completely agree.. Simplicity is the best attire :) Loved it yaar!

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  8. Loved the tiny details. Gather you kept shiv in mind writing this. ;)

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    1. Shivani. Yes! She actually was on my mind! OMG how in the world did you know?

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    2. I can read thoughts. I am prof charles.

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  9. Her beauty is reflected in your words very well! :)
    Mine is also on simplicity.

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    1. I just read yours Umang, It's so simple, yet so admirable!
      Thank you and Welcome to my blog :)

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  10. Makes me want to be in her shoes.. :D awesome!!

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    1. Maybe you already are, Anusree !
      Thank you

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  11. Awesome depiction Soumyaa :) Loved it :)

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  12. you have great narration style. Being a girl I cudn't help falling in love with the blue dress.

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    1. Thank you for that appreciation Anu :)

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  13. beautiful description of her beauty but yes simplicity is more beautiful

    The Lone Survivor

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  14. She could with the simplicity but sometimes dressing up makes you feel great... very nicely done.

    Tina from The Sunny Side of Life

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