Thursday 26 June 2014

Dazzled #FSF

This week's Five sentence Fiction is based on the prompt- DAZZLES





Wearing a skin-clutching blue dress, she took extra care to justify the occasion.
Sweeping eyelashes over her midnight blue eyes, pink lips, flawless defined curves, edged heels giving her elegance, teaser to the rest.  
While others could not have enough of a glance in her direction, she stood in the doorway, hair swaying by the wind, looking passionately as I arrived. 
Hands on her hips and arching eyebrows she gave me a sheepish smile, ready to receive plaudits.

Did she not know that she could dazzle me by her simplicity alone?


What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week Lillie posts one word for inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word.
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28 comments:

  1. mysundrynotes26 June 2014 at 22:18

    you described her beautifully, specially the part "sweeping eyelashes over her midnight blue eyes" ! loved it :) 😊

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  2. Red Handed26 June 2014 at 23:59

    ah man! You made me imagine myself as her! DAMN! Loved it!

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    1. Soumyaa Verma27 June 2014 at 01:30

      I'm sure you are so much more beautiful, we can only keep imagining ;)
      Thank you Red!

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  3. Vinodini27 June 2014 at 02:46

    Wow! Some depiction here eh? Blue-tiful ;)

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  4. Anita Sabat27 June 2014 at 02:56

    Really elegant! So true. Love the 'simplicity' message, Soumyaa

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    1. Soumyaa Verma27 June 2014 at 03:04

      Thank you so much Anita. I'm glad the message could be conveyed

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  5. Aathira27 June 2014 at 03:01

    Such a straight from the hear tale Soumyaa :) Loved it!

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  6. cammies on the floor27 June 2014 at 06:08

    I also love the simplicity of the message, so often that message is unrecognized but so true.

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    1. Soumyaa Verma27 June 2014 at 06:13

      Couldn't agree more! Thank you for being here :)

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  7. Unknown27 June 2014 at 09:02

    Yeah, completely agree.. Simplicity is the best attire :) Loved it yaar!

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  8. Ishan27 June 2014 at 10:30

    Loved the tiny details. Gather you kept shiv in mind writing this. ;)

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    1. Soumyaa Verma27 June 2014 at 11:13

      Shivani. Yes! She actually was on my mind! OMG how in the world did you know?

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    2. Ishan27 June 2014 at 11:26

      I can read thoughts. I am prof charles.

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  9. Anonymous28 June 2014 at 11:51

    Her beauty is reflected in your words very well! :)
    Mine is also on simplicity.

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    1. Soumyaa Verma29 June 2014 at 10:05

      I just read yours Umang, It's so simple, yet so admirable!
      Thank you and Welcome to my blog :)

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  10. Donna Burman28 June 2014 at 23:54

    Makes me want to be in her shoes.. :D awesome!!

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  11. Reema D'souza29 June 2014 at 06:57

    Awesome depiction Soumyaa :) Loved it :)

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  12. Unknown29 June 2014 at 20:47

    you have great narration style. Being a girl I cudn't help falling in love with the blue dress.

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  13. Cifar29 June 2014 at 23:01

    beautiful description of her beauty but yes simplicity is more beautiful

    The Lone Survivor

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  14. Tina Basu30 June 2014 at 05:29

    She could with the simplicity but sometimes dressing up makes you feel great... very nicely done.

    Tina from The Sunny Side of Life

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