Writing for the Five Sentence Fiction prompt- MAPS
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I thought I knew what 'complete' felt like when he found the map to me, making me smile and laugh and cry and grow under the bubble that covered us.
Now thousand miles apart, spaces have grown in our togetherness.
But mourn not for us, for we found happiness in the drops of the sea between the shores of our souls.
Last night, he visited, finally holding the map to my body. I think I now know what 'complete' feels like.
Profound! Wonderful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Soumya! :)
DeleteThis is so beautiful:)
ReplyDeleteBeauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, infact ;)
DeleteYey for the five sentence fiction.
ReplyDeleteThank you! *bows*
DeleteVery poetic and flowing with deep emotion shining through. It's amazing what can be said in 5 sentences!
ReplyDeleteIsn't it? You must check out the other entries too, they're all amazing!
DeleteSuch a punch packed in five sentences, wonderful!
ReplyDeleteAaaand it's coming your way ;)
Deletevery nice Soumya
ReplyDeleteTina from The Sunny Side of Life
Hi, thank you Tina :)
Deletewonderful, so romantic
ReplyDeleteThank you Cifar.
DeleteOh wow. Really good :)
ReplyDeleteEvery word has a meaning. They can stand alone as well as a team to flow through heart. When words can form images in mind and lyrics can become the movie in itself, then its a rare piece
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