Hola everybody! I missed two weeks of friday fictioneers, and missed it I did. Anyhow, I'm back for this week's photo prompt and hopefully here to stay.
This week's beautiful photo is by Kelly Sands, only adding another photo to my collection of sky-photos from around the world! Thank you Kelly, as to you too Rochelle. And a special Thank-you to Kent!
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I felt the texture of the cotton sheets beneath me, which I had clutched on to tightly. While excruciating pain passed from under my delicate skin, I felt an aching satisfaction. Words could not describe how elated I felt in his presence.
Now the silence inside the room pierced through me. The turmoil outside reflected the uproar of emotions in me.
"It was a mistake. I'm sorry" he said.
Still naked, I gazed into the vastness outside my window and felt myself fading away. He had made a mistake, I had found love.
This week's beautiful photo is by Kelly Sands, only adding another photo to my collection of sky-photos from around the world! Thank you Kelly, as to you too Rochelle. And a special Thank-you to Kent!
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| Photo courtesy - Kelly Sands |
I felt the texture of the cotton sheets beneath me, which I had clutched on to tightly. While excruciating pain passed from under my delicate skin, I felt an aching satisfaction. Words could not describe how elated I felt in his presence.
Now the silence inside the room pierced through me. The turmoil outside reflected the uproar of emotions in me.
"It was a mistake. I'm sorry" he said.
Still naked, I gazed into the vastness outside my window and felt myself fading away. He had made a mistake, I had found love.
Why do they do that? My heart bleeds for her.
ReplyDeleteDear Sandra,
DeleteSomehow, I am unable to relate to them. She need to stop fading away. Why do they let them do that?
she needs* Typo there!
DeleteLoving such a person is like enjoying the storm...
ReplyDeleteNicely expressed, Soumyaa :)
Very well said, Anita! I liked your interpretation of this.
DeleteThank you for stopping by.
Phew! So much in so few lines.
ReplyDeleteYou have a beautiful blog here....
Thank you so much Bhavya! That comments inspires me to write more :)
DeleteOh the sweet tortures of love..
ReplyDeleteLoved the way you conjured the images in mind, making me look into her eyes, right from the horizon :)
Hello Somebody :)
DeleteGlad you could connect with her. She has brightly watery eyes, doesn't she ;)
Thank you for reading.
I'm with Sandra on that.
ReplyDeleteGood work this week, Soumyaa!
Thank you Kent !
DeleteLife..you never know how it's going to unfold! This tiny tale leaves me with some mixed emotions. Very nicely penned. :)
ReplyDeleteI hope your emotions get sorted soon, then ;)
DeleteThank you for being here, Payal
Breathtakingly Beuatiful Soumyaa!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sharu!
DeleteNice metaphor; the storm for the sea of emotions in a tumultuous relationship. Well done!
ReplyDeleteNice interpretation! Thanks Perry.
DeleteDear Soumyuaa,
ReplyDeleteI understand you took some serious time with this piece this week. It shows. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you Rochelle. Im glad it shows. Mission accomplished :)
DeleteShalom.
Soumyaa, There's a double standard. He's "made a mistake" and will be forgiven. She may not be and will suffer for it. This is sad but reality. Well written story. : ) ---Susan
ReplyDeleteThank you for correcting me Susan, very well pointed out. I wonder why I didn't see it before! Thanks :)
DeleteThis was sad...but your narration was beautiful! YOU GO GIRL!!!
ReplyDeleteIm sorry if I saddened you! Thanks for that encouragement, Red! You're the best :)
DeleteThis is way too good, Soumyaa...just loved the way you have weaved the emotions. Btw, I've accepted and displayed the award you bestowed on me at my space. Do check it out!
ReplyDeleteThank you Uma!
DeleteAnd yes, on my way to your blog :)